One More Chance

Losing the love of my life

From very start I was I was drawn to With a love Honest and true
Emotions grew deep and strong
With you is where I belong 
But fate so cruelly pulled us apart 
Scattering pieces of my broken
If I had the power to rewrite our romance
Iwould give up everything 
For one more chance 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear poet.
"I would give up everything
For one more chance"
I like the old words written. "If I could stop time, I would go back to you and never allow you to leave my life."
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Emily Rose]

This is beautiful. I love the last four lines and the impact they had on me. I've recently experienced this and can appreciate how honest you are in writing and sharing this. Thank you!

[suhaniizz]

It is just so amazing it even explains my current situation, gathering courage to share your poems which had been stuck in your notebook is a hard task i am glad you shared your work and keep the effort up!

[Rassoul]

you need to add more words to this, yet i enjoyed this so much, keep up the hard work.