Sing, Bird...Sing

A bird with a golden wing

Had one wish....

Because she couldn't sing

 

Again she tried

But her song died

 

The bird with a golden wing

Had one wish

She wants to sing

 

A new morning

Another try

Little bird

Don't be shy!

 

Sing, bird....sing

Show your golden wing

 

That little bird in a tree

Had one wish...

She wanted to be free

Author's Note

Thank you for your review!

Reviews

[Rachel]

beautifully written

[Veratresa]

Very beautiful. :)

[Terohime]

Oh wow this poem was wonderful. I loved how you described the golden wings of the bird and the dream to achieve. Keep working towards your dreams, and never give up on your self.

~Your friend Res.

[icelandicblue]

The need for freedom is universal for man and nature. No voice is as beautiful as the voice that fills the air without fetters or chains.

[CRAIG A. THOMSON]

I love it! The beautifully simplistic style that you have used makes this a joy to read. I believe there's a singing bird in us all just waiting to get out.
Brilliant! Thank you.

[Azriel]

good piece, really liked the metaphor here, it has quite a good and positive message, it really is hopeful.

[Lina Grey]

how cute! reminded me of Dory from Finding Nemo, "just keep swimming, just keep swimming..." don't stop trying to accomplish your dreams. great write :)

[Souladareatease]

I thought it was wonderful!!!
the point is clear, and flutters along, your choice of stanzas work pleasantly as well