Rain like tears.

Err... Read it.

I watch the rain fall,

As i lean against this brick wall,

Tears roll down my face,

Everyone thinks I'm a disgrace,

I cry all alone,

Without it ever being known,

For rain is like tears,

That's how it's seemed for years,

I look at the ground and silently cry,

As people walk by,

And I'm standing still in the freezing cold rain,

No one would ever guess i was ever in any pain.

Author's Note

Even though it's short and kinda bad I still kinda like it :D

Reviews

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I read it and I liked it. ^-^ Such a lonely feeling given, crying in the rain is a good way to hide what you don't want others to see.

[Tina Kline]

I really like this, its written very well. There's a lot of coldness, loneliness and pain in this. Rain can hide tears as well. Outstanding job.