Phoenix

Past the pain,this writer seeks to write again--though newly reborn flutters and stutters...

Birthed from the ashes of a fatal fire
The little bird spreads its wings and rises higher
Soaring over its phantom remains
The cinders that were moments ago infernal flames

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Beautiful, Phoenix. I love this! So appropriate for you to write of your inspiration. Great job.

[Fenix Flight]

I love this poem! Love the image it paints in my head. Well done!!!

[Angels heart]

Great description! Loving it, keep on writing!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Oh, I plan to. Thank you for your review :-)

[Angels heart]

Great!!! Any day.

[Saddam]

The little bird spreads its wings and rises higher
Soaring over its phantom remains.

Beautiful poetry dear.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Aw--thank you SO much!

[Bluefire]

Beautiful poem of rebirth and flight.
It reminds me of Dumbledor's phoenix in Harry Potter. I forget his name.
Very splendidly played!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you...and I LOVE those movies :-)

[Bluefire]

Now I remember! It was Fawkes. xD
You're welcome. ^^

[New Theory]

Awesome, simply awesome, the phoenix rises from its ashes and rises to glory.

[FlamingPhoenix]

ALWAYS! ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

I read this twice. Though why I wanted to say internal instead of infernal, I am not sure.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Sometimes we create our own hell?

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, I guess that is how I thought of it.

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thanks! :-)

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Madalyn Beck]

I love this. What captivating imagery! Set those flames and let them burn, Phoenix. Great write! (:

[FlamingPhoenix]

Many thanks for your kind words!

[Bright Ocean Star]

Exceptionally beautiful. Great write, Phoenix. Love this one!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thanks :-). I'm glad you liked it!