eyelash

love on the wind

eyelash

by FlatDaddy

 

 sleeping.

a single eyelash

wafts through my window

curls on a soft breeze

and falls upon my cheek

the massive spark that strikes me

is all I need to know  ...

you are near

   

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Woah really true and personal? Eyelashes flying wow. Thumbs up to this appealing poem.

Plz also review my newest poem too.

[FlatDaddy]

Thank you so much.

[Chris Shaw]

Incredibly powerful and moving. Different from work of yours I have read before. A tender moment in slow motion FD. Memorable.

Chris

[FlatDaddy]

Wow. Thank you so much, Chris. It's always a joy having you read my work; you say the nicest things about me.

[Thomas W Case]

Quiet as a whisper, fierce as lightning—this tiny moment roars.
One eyelash, one breath, and the world tilts toward you.

[FlatDaddy]

Thank you so much, Thomas. Your comments are always so stunning I am almost embarrassed, my friend. Note I did say, "almost." :)

[Nothing Is Real]

MAN! I was totally unprepared for that one!
You, sir, are a great poet!
Lucky wife, my respects.
Awesome write

[FlatDaddy]

Thank you very much.