White

This is the reason behind my user name :) I like white, a lot

When I think of nothing I think of you

My sweet and empty hue

Without which I have no hint

Oh, how my words will be spent

My sweet and empty hue

Take yourself and leave

Maybe then I can breath

My sweet and empty hue

I will never bother you again

Old friend

Written on my sweet and empty hue

Reviews

[stephanie.elaine]

endearment poured for a color, very unique monsieur blanc.

[AchingAlexandra]

It was very nice, but I think would have had more power had it not rhymed.

[Calypso]

Nice

[Dominic Freschi]

Perhaps the beginnings to a great song?

[Solidad]

This piece makes me smile because it reminds me of a Neil Gaiman character named Hue and he communicates but changing colors. Granted I'm not a big fan of couplets I did like this.