Always By My Side

Another Acrostic

 

Are you really here for good or will I

Lose you too.

Will good things fade with time like they

Always do?

You need to promise me, make me

 

Believe

You will never leave.

 

Maybe you will convince me

You only have one chance

 

Stay with me

Influence me that you won’t leave

Don’t let me lose

Everything I hold dear….

 

And that is you

Reviews

[Imperfection]

This is straight from the heart, so pure and simple but complicated feelings underneath your words.
This has a very strong opening line and you keep getting better with each line,

Will good things fade with time like they

Always do?

Sometimes, I feel this way too.

I loved the ending too. The last line was very powerful.
Excellent write.

[Requiem]

I don't know why but whenever I read a poem my brain translate it into a song. Go figure. This time it was tupelo honey. Just needs some punctuation here and there. Nothing too major.

[~ Tex]

I loved this one! Very well done!

[Tamme]

Beautiful words.

[V. K. Harris]

Wonderfully written.

[rachel D]

i like it wren.
i need to try an acrostic, though i think i will suck at it!
you've done a good job indeed
-r-

[Amor-de-angel]

Hey are you after my queen of the acrostics title? lol

This was really wonderful. Flowed great my friend.
Well done

[.]

Aw man, yea, i def had a tear with this one hehe- i read it out loud soft and slowly. Now, this was really impacting. Awesome choice of words from the soul. Very heartfelt. You've said it very well, and u told it how it really is. Yea, it was very moving to me. Makes u really think deeply. Nice acrostic, too! ;)

Mikey