Everything You Want... Nothing You Need

a little poem I made with song lyrics

You take my love and then you spin me round.
You pull me up and you push me down.

You hold me tight then you walk away.
You say forever and you're gone that day.

You make me remember then you make me forget.
You make me want and you make me regret.

You make me laugh and you make me cry.
You make me live you make me die.

You ask me to sing the tune me out.
You fill me with joy you fill me with doubt.

You ask me to change but you stay the same.
You say you've done nothing wrong and I am to blame.

You keep your secrets but ask me to share.
You ask for help then tell me not to care.

You are everything I want....and nothing I need

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Heretic]

This was very nice. It has the feel of possibly being lyrics to a song. Nicely written and I enjoyed the format in which you wrote it. I think it a lot of people cane relate to this piece because everyone goes out with someone that makes them happy at times, but sad at others. I love that every line has a contradictory ending.

Good job. I like it.