Smile

A simple gesture but a remarkable glow.

Smile

By Render Of Skies

"Keep on smiling"

Smile sealed onto my lips and made me free

I ran onto the beach, skin bare and full of glee

That small vintage memory burned into flames.

Smiles are like that on haze days.

I see the small memory that held hazed my time and oh so free.

I cannot see you, only the smile and me.

 

Author's Note

::3 Keep smiling because I'm not

Reviews

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~ an extremely poignant piece of poetry... my first instinct is to say... how can i smile when you're not smiling ? ... but at the same time, i know that this piece is not addressed to me... ~ the past has to be dealt with... i think writing about it is a good way to deal with it... works for me...

[Renderess Of Skies]

I wrote this yesterday because I had a bad day - I wanted to show the world a smile - so you can smile

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:)

[Renderess Of Skies]

See it worked

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~ but of course... you're a magician...

[Writer #00]

Your formatting and choice of font is truly artistic. I feel as if this is a letter written to the world's 'Unhappies'. A little note that could be left on a post-it somewhere on some crestfallen person's desk or notebook. You have the gift of inspiration and subtle manipulation of the readers' emotions. Thank you for this outstanding poem.

:)/100

[Imagine Blade]

A very spirited and inspiring poem.

What a poem really needs isn't the rhyme but the emotion the writer puts into it.
I felt enlightened but at the same time sad because it feels like it was written by a person who only wants others to be happy, caring less about himself/herself.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I needed this one.
Thanks a lot.

[Renderess Of Skies]

You read me like a book

[Imagine Blade]

^_^

[DrD]

I am pleased to be the first to review this because I found it very sensitive and meaningful. The word useage is excellent and the imagry complete. Thank you for giving us this work, I truly enjoyed reading it.

[Renderess Of Skies]

Thank you