Life Sucks

Why is everything I do not good enough?

I try going after what I want!

Rejection....

Rejection is all I hear....

Rejection all around!

My head says QUIT....

My body says No!

I don't quit that easy!

I still feel like a faliure!

I'm not smart enough....

I'm not good enough....

I'm a nobody!

A nobody that I guess is a wanna be....

I HATE trying to get what I want

And FAIL!

I can't do it anymore!

I'm DONE!!!!

I'm Done with friends....

I'm Done with wants....

I'm Done with fears....

I'm Done with LIFE....

lIFE  that has given me so much misery!

Reviews

[Illegitimate Artist]

As my life seems to be one unwarranted failure after another I can completely relate to not just this piece but the extreme emotion that seems to flow through it.

"Rejection....
Rejection is all I hear....
Rejection all around!"

Love your repetition! It cuts right to the heart of it. Its difficult for any one to find a will to move forward after that.

Nice work. Very expressive!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I think everyone can relate to this piece.... it's so hard to be thought a failure by almost everyone... agh, how sad it is to think yourself a failure... only know you are your worst critic and don't be to hard on yourself... Your emotions were very well expressed and it just made the poem an enjoyable, emotional read... Life does suck but s**t happens and life goes on... Great Write!!!

[*kerri*]

I liked this, for personal reasons I suppose.
You did a great job of really conveying emotions and I felt like I was almost going through them too.