If October Was A Woman

If October was a woman,

I would kiss her autumnal lips.

If October was a woman,

I would hold her bountiful hips.

If October was a woman,

I would thread her golden hair.

If October was a woman,

I would succumb to her heated stare.

If October was a woman,

She would wear a warm-hued dress,

And the wind would be her caress.

She would unveil the underworld spirit,

To make you aware, but not to fear it,

And she would make you Fall in love,

If October was a woman.  

Reviews

[Gee]

Awww, what a delightful read. If October was a woman she would be fine for 2 weeks then morph into the nutty premenstrual, menstrual and post menstrual loony, that would have any man walking on eggshells and thinking, "Jesus, what planet is she from, cos it definitively ain't Venus "

[FractalLuna]

I had to laugh at this review. It took an interesting turn to Mars right after the first sentence!
Our October's can be temperamental, too, but inherently gorgeous.
Here's hoping your October isn't too nutty!

[Gee]

Me and my October Miss have just celebrated 23 years of blissful wedlock....glad you enjoyed the comments (psssst, I'm shite at reviewing, so often try something other than the norm)

[FractalLuna]

Your abnormal reviews are effective!
Congratulations on 23 years!

[Gee]

Cheers, hopefully, God willing, well, that's if there actually is a God, I'd imagine if there was one, he would have smited (is that a word) us all, for making such a balls up of, of, EVERYTHING, we'll have many more.

[FractalLuna]

Well, I believe in the power of energy and think humans set their own intentions, so I say no worries about the smiting and set your powerfully good intentions on enjoying many more :)

[Lorry]

Beautifully creative words and flow. Could almost hear strings slowly play along to your words, lifting them higher and floating back down so softly. Beautiful write.

[FractalLuna]

Thank you for your kind words. It was fun to write. A lovely crescendo to welcome the season!