Flame of Passion

senryu

the flame of passion

   is fed once again each time

            you draw near my love

           

   

Reviews

[writ rajat]

Very nicely intruded into my brain

[Fran Marie]

thanks so vey much..

[Madalyn Beck]

Nice! From an ember to a flame. Beautiful! :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks Madalyn, so much;

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that s great . that s great poem. that s great love .

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much;

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you very welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Simply beautiful Senryu. :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks, Ana,

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Simply Beautiful.



Flesh to flesh heart to heart
Making love so lovely.



thank you for your kind review and comment
you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Fran Marie]

thanks Benita, so veymuch

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. was a pleasure to read. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done....the flicker becomes a torch...searing the flesh and the mind at the same time.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Jacob, so very much;