Cuddle Up Butter Cup

senryu poem

 

Bitten by spring's bug

              cuddle up my butter cup

                                 with kisses and hugs

               

Reviews

[Roland Petrov]

For me, this is a quintessential senryu because it's light in tone. Who doesn't have a chocolate and peanut butter addiction! Beautifully done, with the humor and the picture.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Roland so vey much;

[fattycbreezy52]

This is very cute and natural.
keep on writing more.
love the format and alignment:)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks fattybtrezy52
So glad you enjoyed..

[Lyn Anderson]

Spring's bug eh? Read my April's song. Spring's a little slow where we are.:)

[Fran Marie]

Well, yeah, I know, ..been cool and windy today..yes I will read your April song..making some rounds now..thanks for reading KL

[613]

This is very sweet & straight to the point. Great job.

- Brittney

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Brittney, so. Very much..

[613]

You're welcome!

[alf]

Hi Fran. Such a yummy senryu!!! Both fill us with that warm fuzzy feeling, just love the allusion, alf

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Alf, so ver much appriciate it..

[Adam Adams]

Your 'senryu' looks like a cold gush of winds that comes with eloquence & touches the face with its softness... leaves the life with its scents for long. Very refreshing write. Enjoyed reading your words!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Adams ever si my h appriciate your review..glad you enjoyed..

[Maumil Mehraj]

It's amazing to see how you've accommodated an experience in a few words!
The poem made me smile :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much , Maumil;..glad you enjoyed my poem..

[sereenaoutloud]

this is a delicious write! I can feel the peanut butter cups hugging my insides lol :))

[Fran Marie]

Love reeses peanut butter cups the best..thanks Sereena..

[sereenaoutloud]

me too..Yum :))

[Valentine]

Too sweet, I want a big bite...of spring of course. Smiling. Valentine

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, so much Valentine,

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a freshly expressed spring poem...feeling those hugs as I look at the blossoms.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob ..yes; springtime certainly is refreshing