seasons of love

a senryu of sorts

Beneath soft moonlight

          

           stars whisper our names in love

                                    summertime romance

Cool air chills the night

        leaves dance to an autumn breeze

                                     we feel love's embrace   

Snowflakes free falling

         white magic blankets the ground

                                     we share winter's warmth

Robins sing spring's  song

           dripping raindrops kiss our lips

                                  and then there is you

Reviews

[Ilerah]

I like the way you wrote each season in different colors. Very descriptive, well written, and over all good. I like the picture you added too, it really adds to the poem.

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, glad you enjoyed..

[Ilerah]

Your welcome, glad to help!

[....................]

A wonderful journey of love through the seasons in senryu and haiku. Well done!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks FT,,so much appriciated..

[weatherbee]

Such a beautiful poem. I love your combination of words.
I really enjoyed it.

WB

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, weatherbee..so vey much..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oooh yeah...like how you put all of these together to make a unified poem from senryu and haiku.....

nicely done....definitely felt the shivers,then the warmth...

and spring is a starting over...i felt the love starting over in this...new season, new chance...
love awakening.

[Fran Marie]

Yes, love renewed, thanks, Jacob so very much;