Love's Symphony~

Come~

 play for me

     softly each key

piano notes light as summer's breeze

  Dance~ 

 among golden flower's fragrance

      we'll sway to love's melody

while the scent of heaven fills the air

  There~

  beneath sun's bright ivory glow

      we shall pledge our love

a forever springtime tune

                    

                               playing love's  symphony

 

Reviews

[Confuser]

Fran: You are simply a remarkably talented poet. It like I'm inside a dream world, a wonderland sprinkled with soft suttle and light tones of harmony. The title Love's Symphony is certainly befitting and your use of metaphors are brilliant, like your work. I am so thankful to read it. Just beautiful as always. Thank you so very much once again. Dale

[Fran Marie]

Awhh..thanks so very much, Dale for reading and for your lovely kind reviews..I so appriciate..

[Confuser]

My pleasure Fran!

[Indra Neil]

blissful imagery in this fine brevity! the metaphors are brilliant! Thank u for sharing this wonderful poetry!

[Fran Marie]

thanks Indra ; so very much appreciate it...

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome!

[mattavelli]

The last line wrapped this up nicely. Content and layout combined, gave it a soft whimsical tone. I can see a conductor waving her pen to start each phrase. Thanks for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks mattavelli, so very much glad you enjoyed...

[Matching Socks]

When you find someone who you can sing and dance in harmony with, through life.
That's chemistry. Love this one.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Ana so vey much..glad you enjoyed ...

[Wicahpi]

Written ever so softly, sweetly; flowing with the fragrance of flowers ~ 'There~' I enjoy the simplicity yet mastered like a brilliant symphony. Thank you for your entry into the "Picture Poem This" contest and congratulations on your Blue Ribbon.

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Picture-Poem-This/51391/

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Wichapi, so very much appriciate your review I enjoyed participatomg..

[~]

what a gorgeous and romantic plea. Who could ever say no to this magical invitation? I love your imagination and that beautiful fountain of creative mind that you have. :D

[Fran Marie]

Tbsnks, moonskittles, so ver much appriciated

[Ashley]

I really like it, brilliant :D

[Fran Marie]

Thanks. Ashley, so much appriciated

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh....how absolutely breathtaking the romance in this one is! The words sway to the rhythm of love, Fran Marie. Love's symphony is ever so sweet. Lydi**

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Lydi, so very much appriciated...

[Rana]

Filled with magical music, soft, beautiful words, heart-warming imagery and lovely thoughts, this poem was a pure delight to read.

[emmajoy]

Smiling, sighing.. such a peaceful and contented drift of loving words. Beautiful.. not saying more cos it would spoil the way i feel right now. Sighhhh

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Emmajoy, so glad you enjoyed..

[Ilerah]

Love it, I have no idea how to describe it, but I like it. I love the way you wrote it, its short, but you don't need it long to write much. You write in between the lines. So good, great read here.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much...Llerah. So very much Appriciated..

[Ilerah]

Glad to help out

Ilerah