Love's Symphony~

Come~

 play for me

     softly each key

piano notes light as summer's breeze

  Dance~ 

 among golden flower's fragrance

      we'll sway to love's melody

while the scent of heaven fills the air

  There~

  beneath sun's bright ivory glow

      we shall pledge our love

a forever springtime tune

                    

                               playing love's  symphony

 

Reviews

[Confuser]

Fran: You are simply a remarkably talented poet. It like I'm inside a dream world, a wonderland sprinkled with soft suttle and light tones of harmony. The title Love's Symphony is certainly befitting and your use of metaphors are brilliant, like your work. I am so thankful to read it. Just beautiful as always. Thank you so very much once again. Dale

[Fran Marie]

Awhh..thanks so very much, Dale for reading and for your lovely kind reviews..I so appriciate..

[Confuser]

My pleasure Fran!

[Tomás Ó C..]

Beautiful flow to this Fran...

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tom , glad you dropped by;

[wordman]

and the orchestra played a beautiful melody

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Ron, so very much;

[....................]

So love the movement in this wonderful symphony of words and felt like getting up and dancing around the house.. what the heck, here goes!

[Fran Marie]

well, yeah, dance while ye may.. lol. Thanks FT.;

[Valentine]

Soft and very sweet write. Valentine

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Valentine, so vey much...

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful flow of thoughts dear Poet. We need a love's symphony to keep love and hope alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, John, ever so much

pri

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.