and we danced~

..contest write. For Blue Rose cafe challenge

and i danced..  as if in a hazy dream

    

                                    like a ballerina

amid lilac's heavenly scent, on a sunlit day

                

                                  and there you lie

in a pitch-black room, sad drowning in misery

 

                    and i danced over to your side

come love i whisper gently, take my hand

                                 and there i stood

waiting determined to break your mood

          and the smell of lilacs grew stronger

with an unpleasant odor

                                   and there you died

as i held your hand in mine

        and then in the black room shone a brilliant light

                                     

  and we danced~

                               

                                  

Author's Note

Just a dream that seemed so real

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I love those sort of dreams have precious few that I remember but usually when i do they are so poignant. I love the Lilac reference I have so many things attached to the smell of lilacs. beginning to think its a poet thing:) that picture and message makes me want to jump into that painting and take that hand

[Fran Marie]

Hi Robert..thanks for stopping by to review
yes..lilacs may be a poet thing..I notice they are
written about in much poetry..much appreciate your words;

[Ragan G.]

Beautiful!!!!
I really liked this poem.

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, glad you liked it..

[Helen Crutchett]

Hi Fran. I am always in for a treat when I read your submissions and this was no exception. Very lovely indeed!. Thank you so much for joining in my contest. ~ Helena ~

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, so much, Helena, I always enjoy entering your. Contests..

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful. One final waltz before we go. Can we wish for anything more.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much..I appriciate it.

[....................]

a passed soul returning to dance another soul into the next life...what a beautiful image you paint here, Fran...well-done

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, FT, I so appriciate it;