Rain Kiss

Haiku

  

Light drizzling raindrops

 

licked our lips with fresh wet scent

 

we kissed in the rain

Reviews

[Archia]

Oh now that's sweet. I love the image that came to mind from this, it was all full of sweetness.

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the imagery and sensuality is simply stunning

[Brianna Brie]

This has fresh summer rain written all over it. I love your creativity here.

[Aria]

When you can striek up an old memory or wish in your readers, you've done your job. Evoking emotion in readers is difficult but worth the work. And this piece is lovely and bittersweet. One can't tell if the person is thinking of the past with his or her lover or just thinking of the past. Good work.

[Mysty Rayn]

This is so sweet. I could picture the moment perfectly.

[Spat Queen]

Nothing like a kiss in the rain. This piece makes one long for one. Excellent work.

[A.J. Smith]

Very nice! Romantic, subtly sensual, very sensory...really love your second line...masterful, appealing haiku.

[Mark Pearce]

A saucy Haiku.

Cheers for that!

A great photo to accompany the piece as well.

[Yvonne Heidt]

Oh, this is goooood. With this short piece you took me back to my teen years when the love of my life and I were kissing in the rain. Excellent job on this.