fortune cookie

plays sad my heart strings
words written on thin slivers
strips my spirit bare

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Oh those fortune cookies. How we hope we are going to strike lucky. Not so here Fran Marie, I felt the after shock of disappointment. Nicely conveyed.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

thanks Chris
I know right..
disappointing more
so than pleasing

[barleygirl]

Somehow, in so few words, you managed to inject into my skin the feeling of unfounded hopefulness just before reading that anticipated strip! It's never as delicious as we remembered! Just dry cookie & uninspired words! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Confucius say you
got Wong cookie
dry up dust bring
tears to eyes..
thanks Margie
I appreciate 😉

[barleygirl]

Wong cookie . . . you are hilarious! *smile*

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Emily Dickinson wrote...that writing is "the human chariot that bears the soul"

we are for sure.
nicely expressed here.
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob..
Sorry s o late ..
Completely missed
this review..