A New Dawn

 

                  
A New Dawn
           breaks in the orient sky
                     and once again I'm here with you
                          my love

 

A low tide ebbs the shoreline
            as we watch the shimmering sun
                        start to rise in honey- shades of
                               crimsom-gold hues beyond the blue horizon
 

The complete effect of sharing
            a new dawn rising, with you,
                       awakens my spirit ,swings my senses
                                to new heights,
  as we capture this private moment togrther

It's apparent you are the half
           of me, which completes my soul,
                        and holds my heart,
                                and darling,I desire to spend
               each rising new dawn with you    
                         

 

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

i was so excited to see a new post from you my dear :) i knew it would fill me with yummy feelings and hope for the future :) hehe

"It's apparent you are the half
of me, which completes my soul,"

hellooooo .... gorgeous.

brilliant, as always. i can always count on you to write something beautiful :)

[Trée]

Gorgeous, heartfelt poem. I like the idea of an 'orient sky.' :-)

[A.J. Smith]

Beautiful, Fran...a lovely, sentimental piece that touches me, especially since I am so completely enamored with all things Dawn. I also love your visual presentation.

[Justin Tobey]

Simply beautiful. Your words create powerful feelings of love, peace, and awe at the daily miracle of dawn. Good job and Blessed Be! :D

[WritefromtheHeart]

Oh Fran Marie this is simply gorgeous and full of so much love...and lovely visuals prompted by both your word and the photos!! I love this!!!!

[Moonlit-Blues]

Beautiful, instensity captured in the heat of a sunrise. Beautifully penned!
Adding to favourites. :)

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I love the picture! You really captured what could be happening in the photo. I loved the structure of the poem. It reminded me of tides going in and out. Very good!