Criss X Cross

Acrostic

 

 

Can't you see why I love you dear?
Reasons should seem so very clear
Inside, my heart beats true
Sensing life without you,'tis indeed blue
Since loving you brings me cheer

Can't you feel the same love for me?
Realizing our love was meant to be
Oh how I wish for your love returned
Seeing desired flames inside your eyes burn
Speaking words of love for only me

Reviews

[angelina neves]

Lovely acrostic! very creative

[Jamestown]

You definitely pulled it off
really cool, creative and well written!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[alf]

Hi Fran. yahoo. We have a competition here, methinks. Wonderful! This is something a started fiddling with a couple of weeks ago (I mean acrostics) so I'm still blown away by what I see some people create, alf

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, so much, Alf..I agree...so many great creative poets and writings on this site.

[alf]

Isn't it great???

[Emily Paige]

another awesome one it has great flow

[_thesovo]

Haha, this is cool! Thank's for sharing in my contest.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Another lovely acrostic, Fran. Thank you for entering it into my contest. Debileah