Another Wave

Senryu

         Writing the beauty

  of what I see, chrystal drops

     matching my sad tears

        Mocking my deep fears

    outside my window, falling

           while I hide inside

 

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

A beautiful disaster. With a dash of insecurity.

You should make it a point to look people in the eyes. Not to be creepy... but to be direct without talking. It's a skill, you should learn it.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Dave for reading
I so appreciate it...

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Fran. I believe, few people see our real face. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. No wasted words.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear John
s o very much appreciate
your kind review;

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Wonderful submission Fran. I so enjoyed how both these compliment each other in sadness and angst. Job well done. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Carlos. for reading
and your kind words on this
one..