Still Pose

        purest rose so fair

rain sprinkles kiss petals bare

       still posed in beauty

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

Loved this!@ beautiful and dreamy haiku. Great job

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Sean.glad for the
visit and your kind words on this one

[Sean M. Addams]

Anytime 😊

[Einstein Noodle]

a prayer to read before bed .. sure to bless with peaceful dreams and calm sleep .. love this .. love you have added rhyme to this ageless form ... well done!! super emotive .. i have four rose bushes and the one i plucked out of the wild (truly .. growing wile in the forest) is a beautiful pinkish orange .. and it is still budding and flowering ;))))))))))))) perfect title as well .. nice work Fran!
E.

[Fran Marie]

Awhh that's nice..thanks E. I love roses
also ..they do tend to pose as if you're
taking a picture of the..little show offs
lol..i appreciate your kind words😊

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! they do don't they!? :)))))))))))))))))) little show offs indeed .. love it!

[Chris Shaw]

A gem of a Haiku. Kissed by raindrops. Beautiful imagery Fran. Thank you for sharing. Hope you are keeping well.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris so very much appreciate
your words..all is well in KY..wishing
you the same😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Beautiful Haiku…. Love roses after a misty rain, the scent is scintillating!
Tiny water specks dance among the petals……🌹
Best to you!
B.

[Fran Marie]

rain and roses make a good mix
Thanks Betty so very much😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Fran⭐️

[barleygirl]

My favorite way to enjoy a blossom is still on the plant *smile*

[Fran Marie]

me too Margie..so much fresher
and nicer on their emerald stems
thanks so much;

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Such a perfect image captured in these words. Excellent work Fran. Thank you for another lovely piece.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Carlos..i appreciate your
kind words on my poem

[Tricessimus]

A beautiful poem when taken at face value but the levels of symbolism cannot go unnoticed. Rain as the male, the seed, the Omen for fertility, while the flower is undeniably a feminine symbol. You draw up the image of raw lips as well as raw feminine petals.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tricessimusor your
thoughts on this one..i see
what you mean; I do appreciate

[.]

Roses are as beautiful as this poem...very soothing to read... Nicely penned

[Fran Marie]

Awhh thanks so much Sima
I s o appreciate your kind words;

[.]

You are welcome...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a soft touch haiku....
I know haiku and senryu are not supposed to be titled, but I title all of mine too.
I think that is a dumb rule I enjoy violating.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob..i kno right? me too
it's still a poem..so it deserves a name