`an evening dream`

 

~Haiku~

 

A burning red sun
smiles upon us in July,
eve'ning's sweet dreams send

 

stars bright in the sky
whispering the soft message
of love to behold

 

as July's moon winks
granting me my sweet wishes
bringing you to me

 

once again, a love
blooms  amid a summer rain's
sprink'ling misty hue

from heavens above
as we share eternal bliss
of an eve'ning dream

 

 

Reviews

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

Truly a beautiful poem! A very great artisticly written poem on eternal love which actually lets the reader envision the beauty of God's majestic heavenly masterpiece in their minds!
A truly splendid passage of writing!
Bravo, dear friend!
TIM

[Tara Jean Olson]

gorgeous!

[None]

Your Haiku is breathtaking and reads so beautifully! Romance and emotion are felt in the heart through your amazing words. I hope you don't mind, I'm going to feature this in the Cafe Love group! Very enjoyable and so well written.