The Deepest Part

Haiku

 

A   river   runs   free

 

      the deepest part of me flows

 

                              with ev'ry ripple

Reviews

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I definitely like this haiku. This is the best kind of work, in fact, because I learned something by reading it. "ev'ry" I never thought to do this with words of that type. I could think of many haikus where I could have written better by saving just one syllable. What do you call that, when you write a word like 'every' as "ev'ry?"
Thank you so much!

[Cendrine Marrouat]

What a beautiful haiku! "ev'ry' is a great touch, it layers the piece with an old-fashioned feel.

[Geo Lawrence]

no wonder you beat me in the contest. this is a classical work!

[Fran Marie]

Thank you for your kind comment;

[Indra Neil]

Congratulations! *claps* :)

[Fran Marie]

Thank you, Indra,I appriciate it..

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome!

[youngkingkwan]

Like the river this is deep, and only to those in tune with their spirituality.

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, I so appropriate it...

[Lasune]

Ah! I love this it says so much with so little.

[Fran Marie]

Thankd Lasune, so very much;

[Robin]

a haiku from the soul

[quinfinn]

excellent example of haiku, personification of a river to the extreme! awesome work...

[Desert Dreamer]

A poem to contemplate, the inner self flows free like a river. We could learn a lot from a river.

[ice]

A most beautiful haiku,spiritual, and earthy...
The black and white photo is a perfect choice.
enjoyed

[Veeanna]

I love the picture and the haiku. I also love the idea of the apostrophe in every to make it fit the style of writing.

Love this. =)