The Deepest Part

Haiku

 

A   river   runs   free

 

      the deepest part of me flows

 

                              with ev'ry ripple

Reviews

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I definitely like this haiku. This is the best kind of work, in fact, because I learned something by reading it. "ev'ry" I never thought to do this with words of that type. I could think of many haikus where I could have written better by saving just one syllable. What do you call that, when you write a word like 'every' as "ev'ry?"
Thank you so much!

[Tony Hwilka]

Like it, very short and sweet. I hate poems that go on and on and you forgot what you read by the time you got to the end. GOOD JOB

[Suelou]

Very well done, Fran.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Short and to the point, The deepest part of you flows with every ripple, Excellent qoute.

[Mysty Rayn]

Very deep. A lot of thought can be put into what you have said here. I like how it made my wheels turn each time I read it.