Half a Heart

Half a heart remains

 

      left with shredded promises

 

                    still crying your name

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Congratulations!
This is such a terrific write, Fran...
It's amazing how much emotion you can get out of so few words...
You did a wonderful job...
allen

[.......]

Love this, this is wonderful

I can see why this would've won. I can feel the anguish.

[Charles]

Wonderfully emotive.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem!

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great haiku

[Mason Vail]

a common heart's cry
words and picture say it all
very nicely done

;)

[Brianna Brie]

Well, is there ever a poem of yours I didn't like? This is short, but drives home a stake! Thanks for entering this into my contest "In My Love's Words".

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Wow, the pic matches the poem and the poem is very well-thoughtout. Thank you for posting this. I'm sure many (especially me) can relate to this one.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[The Mad Prophet]

Nice little flow, short little poem. I tried to keep this review short too :)

Very well done.