Suddenly Spring

Urenga Parameter Form

Fountain of treasures
appear burgeoning buds,bursting colors
emanating an
essence of spring's bouquet,a saltation
of green roots leaping forth


emanating an
essence of spring's bouquet,a saltation
of green roots leaping forth
into spring flowers
bouncing with light fragrant breezes


into spring flowers
bouncing with light fragrant breezes
as blossoms delight
on delicate, flexible stems
suddenly it's spring in grand style

Reviews

[Honeypot]

I'm ready for spring too! Nice poem. In the last stanza I could almost smell it as I read. Good job.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful expression, softly moving, bringing a beautiful sense of new life... the new life of spring... Wonderful, tender write...

[angelina neves]

Very beautiful!

[Sarah Emily]

This is good. I like the feeling you get from reading it.

[Valentine]

It realy is time for Spring to be let sprung loose so those in those copld icy places can warm up..Did you mean to repeat the same three lines? It kind of looses something there...God bless..Valentine

[Ladysue]

A beautiful and descriptive piece. Just loved it especially the ending. Spring does put forth a grand style!!!!! A lovely written poem!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

An amazing account of just how blissful springtime is... I am so ready for it.

[Sheila Kline]

Poetically correct and just beautiful!!....yes, and when it is spring in grand style we shall all smile!
Good luck with the challenge!!