April Rain

 

April rain falls fresh as the morning dew
             which kisses the palest pink rose
where everything old seems suddenly new
              scintillating scents,where an April bloom grows

April's azure' sky's scheme stays boldly blue
            while willing wisps of wind softly blow
sparkling splashed leaves glow glassy green
                         Robins puffed proudly,their song to sing

and soft wet grass,feels cool beneath barefeet
                       ushering a renewal of springtime so sweet

Reviews

[Gandré]

I came again...to read your wonderful work.....this is amazingly beautiful and you've chosen the most perfect rose..... I love spring. My favorite lines were:
sparkling splashed leaves glow glassy green
Robins puffed proudly,their song to sing -------deep + alliteration -----head rhyme initial rhyme

[Tomás Ó C..]

Nice to come across this again...

[Fran Marie]

Hi Tom..thanks for stopping by..and reviewing..ever so appreciate it..

[kentuck14]

Nicely done! A great lyric. So, it's spring up in Paris??!!
Tom, from Lexington

[Fran Marie]

Hi Tom from Lexington..thanks for reading and reviews..yesterday was in the 80 s.. actually more like summer...today 20 degrees cooler..that's. KY..weather just wait five minutes..it will change..

[kentuck14]

that's so true.

[Im His Daughter]

Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry. I loved the poem!

[T.Marie]

This is wonderful! thank you for submitting.

[Jamestown]

Very nice calming and beautiful piece of work! I always love your poetry,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, James, I so vey much appriciat your reviews,

[Jamestown]

Your welcome and I so very much enjoy your poetry:)

[Aasia]

I liked it. Love rain love this poem. After rain everything looks fresh as it has taken birth now.

[Fran Marie]

Yes, rain is so refreshing...Thanks, Aasia; so much;

[weatherbee]

Great way to usher in spring!
thanks for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks ..so very much;

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for Spring. I like the month of April. To see life come alive again. I like the photo and the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[DrSprinkz73]

OH! The Rose! I love that you used the photo for Emphasis!