Shadows

 

Within the shadows, evil lurks
 'tis when vamps spin their deadly curse
and Hell's black rain pelts midnight's earth
you'll fear the worse, the very worse

 

So savagely without remorse
they'll devour you,in bloodbath course
with blood red lips of draining force
you no recourse,you no recourse

 

Nothing you say will save your soul
these immortal ones take control
as they drink in shadow's dark glow
they covet blood, heart,mind and soul

 

Wild tales as these, you've surely read
unexplained horrors we all dread
so I plead,take heed,of what I said
be warned, beware or you'll be dead

 

 

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

oh wow Fran I really do love this one its nice to see someone else who have a talent for the dark too.... very amazing piece here... your writing always impresses me... fav lines...Within the shadows, evil lurks
'tis when vamps spin their deadly curse
and Hell's black rain pelts midnight's earth
you'll fear the worse, the very worse

................................................................ very nice !!!

So savagely without remorse
they'll devour you,in bloodbath course
with blood red lips of draining force
you no recourse,you no recourse

[Brianna Brie]

You have launched off Halloween with this thriller! This is magnificent work...perfect rhyme. I see you can dabble on the dark side and succeed well!

Within the shadows, evil lurks
'tis when vamps spin their deadly curse
and Hell's black rain pelts midnight's earth
you'll fear the worse, the very worse

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this piece alot
Wonderfully written
I love your dark pieces