Happy

All I want in life is to be happy. Honestly somehow it always seems I'm dreaming of something I can never be. My life is such a waste, I can't bare to face what's growing in my head. Pounding it starts again, I'm watching the rise and fall of my salvation. Something takes a part of me. Keep holding on when my brains ticking like a bomb.

Author's Note

These words are not my own. I got them from various songs by the band KoRn. (Titles include: Happy-KoRn, A.D.I.D.A.S-KoRn, Hating-KoRn, Counting-KoRn, Here it Comes Again-KoRn, Make Me Bad-KoRn, Freak on a Leash-KoRn, Coming Undone-KoRn). Again, I only arranged the lyrics in a way that I found interesting I don't by any means own any rights to these words.

Reviews

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I was actually did same few years back with titles of songs by Fugazi. Sometimes it's can make more sense then if you have already ideas at your head. What I see at your poem it's like storm of chaotic thoughts which they don't give you rest . And centrum of your brain is in constant move.

So it was cool to read at least for me.

[Freak]

I appreciate your review :). Sometimes it's hard for me to express my emotions in my own words, and when I pulled this together, the lyrics made sense and I used them to my advantage.

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At past I use to listening to my favorite music. And let my mind just flow. When I get stuck I use some words from lyrics or use title or try describe cover of the album. Now I just write my own words they are not do great but they are mine. Good luck with your writing.

[Karmee]

This is really good, i like this. it is emotional

[JMaster1]

anyway its cool
its like you wrote the words
I like this one

[Gee]

It's seems like it's a pipe dream
that happiness for me
is just beyond my arms reach
and will never ever be.
So each dawning day unwelcome
dark thoughts cloud my mind,
and I wonder if and ever
my salvation I will find

Just trying to put your thoughts and their words into a simple poem :))

Give it a go.

[Freak]

I really like that. Haha. I'm not sure if I'm capable of that caliber of a poem.

[Gee]

Just simple rhyming verse with an evenish best :))

[Freak]

I made a poem and posted it just now, however it doesn't rhyme.

[Gee]

I post all manner of piffle, some rhyming and some not. Try not to become pigeon holed as many on here do :)

[Freak]

I will try to post all sorts of things and I don't find the things you post nonsense. Although I haven't delved to deeply into your works.