Release

Every step I take
Is a step towards my imminent fate
Every breath I inhale
Is an exhale closer to my grave
Every blink of my eye
Is a look into my future
Time is unforgiving
Life is foreboding
When will I get release

Author's Note

All my stuff is weird and dark, I apologize.

Reviews

[JMaster1]

Don't apologize, I love your words here
They touched me deep

[becca]

i love the simplicity, it does seem to truly represent how life feels. ya know, dark or not.

[Gee]

These lines read like they belong to a longer piece, perhaps a song.
Never apologize for anything you post :))

[Freak]

I may have to keep working on this one. I just write randomly, that came out of my head in 5 minutes, this only happens on a few occasions

[Gee]

Keep at it. Right, I'm off to work, you take care young lady and keep at it. Nice to meet you :)

[Freak]

Nice to meet you too :)