Forgotten Reality

A Book by CinderBows

13-year-old Lindsay Blueswift is a troubled child, and she uses her sleep to escape. Her dreams are so satisfying, that she becomes so engulfed and obsessed with them that her real life crumbles.

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© 2010 CinderBows

Author's Note

Kindly point out any spelling or grammar problems. I am very inexperienced, so any helpful tips or constructive critisism would be great. Also, I would love if you gave me a review of my writing so far, what you like, what could be added...etc., etc. Thank you very much for reading!

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AlmostAlice

Wow, these 2 chapters are really good! I'm getting a good idea on what Lindsay and her surroundings are like. I really liked the very first line in chapter 2
- Brisk autumn air swirled around Lindsay like the angry thoughts in her head.-
Very good descriptions.

Good writes.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on February 17, 2010
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Author

CinderBows

Canada

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BIO: I'm a young writer who feels at ease with a pen and paper, I feel I can express my feelings and opinions much better through what is written, than spoken. Music is my passion, and I aspire to tur.. more..