" I Have To Stand And Face This World Alone... "

Don't make your care a limitation for your loved ones!

Why can't you see my happiness through my eyes..

Over expectations keeps pulling me down..

I understand that you care..

But..

I have to stand and face this world alone !

If you keep making my life decisions..

How will I ever learn ?

How will I become strong ?

How will I become independent?

I am not meant to fulfill all your wishes..

Its not possible to make everyone happy..

As I have my own wishes too !

I don't always need your fingers pointing out my mistakes..

But your appreciation on my efforts to fight out my weaknesses!

I want you to see my battles..

I fell..

I stood up again..

And never gave up!

Doesn't this make you happy?

You want me to stay away..

From the roads which are not taken by all..

But will this ever make the difficulties of my life..

To change their path?

See through my eyes..

I can see your love and concern..

Don't let your love become my weakness!

I understand that you care..

But..

I have to stand and face this world alone !

Reviews

[Fede]

This reminds me of coming of age. It's a moment of selfishness, only you will be able to live your life yet parents and friends correct you, try to help you messing everything up. It's hard to learn, to become strong and independent when people keep making your life decisions.
It's a really good poem with excellent choice of words. Keep it up!

[Free_Soul]

its really nice to know that people find it easy to connect to your poems...thank you so much :)

[Bhavana Singh]

Quite practical . Love the flow of thoughts :)

[Free_Soul]

thank u Bhavana :) :)

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Free_Soul]

Thank you Melissa :) :)

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Stephen]

Whao! Awesome! Am sure a guy is damn lucky who's got a blessing to life his whole life with ya, pretty. I hope he knows how damn lucky he is to have you n your love in his life. Anyway, May God keep him always lucky especially when he comes forward to steal ya from your nights :)

I love this piece, now let me tell ya one more imp. thing that I read this write on my phone and believe me I, specially for ya, turned on my laptop for writing a lengthy review for this marvelous write to give some tribute to you into words.

Here's few words come from the bottom of my heart just for ya, Honey ...

Your the beauty of the world,
May your someone keeps ya away from being hurt,
I hate seeing tears in your wide blue ocean eyes,
Your just made to live into the depth of an every demon's heart...

May God keep ya always happy with him!
May he fill your every scented dream!
Your fragrance makes the demon feel high..
Your a choco-cake and of course a vanilla ice cream ;)

I adore this beautiful write and heyy, yeah, your an angel and angels don't need demon's help, they are strong so are you. You can make ya own image in the world and heyy, little miss pretty..I wish you much luck, May you soon touch the sky and get success on your neath :)

I loved your this new post, sweetie. Am sure, your a much talented angel and hey..May you soon get published :)

Your a fire in hearts, Honey.
I hope to read your bunches of new writes as many as I could before leaving the site :)

Keep it up an excellent performance of your artistry!

[Free_Soul]

Woww..such a wonderful review... so happy and motivated :D
i m not a very good writer ..so never thought of publishing my work....but thank you so much for your wishes...i hope some day..i come up very gud work...as i m learning... :)
lemme tell u one thing...that Cute and sweet poem u dedicated to me..is awesome...i loved it !! U come up with such a great write..and keep motivating me :) :)

[Stephen]

You make me smile, Honey. Well, it's all my pleasure to make some blushes on an angelic face keeping her motivated. Your a good writer, no matter what. After all, your an angel ..lol and yeah, desire of learning is what makes everyone feel highly skilled so keep learning, sweetie..me too daily love learning new things. Thanks, pretty for loving my poem, I do appreciate your coolio words, pretty. Am glad even it's an honor to me that an angel loved a demon's poem that's well written for an angel by a demon oneself :P Thanks. Well, I'll soon leave the site but as long as am over the site, I'd love to keep an angel motivate after all, your all what whose scent makes a demon feel high and the addiction of your fragrance's much higher than any drug, Honey. My well wishes are always with ya :) Stay beautiful, you little pretty an angelic sweetie :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

If you keep making my life decisions
How will I ever learn
How will I become strong
How will I become independent?
liked these lines very much n its a fact that one has to stand n face this alone .gud one ....

[Free_Soul]

Thank u so much Utkarsh !!