Prologue: The strongest teen

In a world ruled by perfection 2 brothers stand on opposite sides of the same coin. One is hailed as the strongest teen alive. The other is nothing. Can their bond hold up or will it all fall.

Prologue: The strongest teen

A monster towered in the distance. 100 feet tall and half as wide. It left cities in ruin and spread chaos like a fire. People ran in fear. Some were pinned under debris, others were already dead. This is a monstrosity, it is trying to break perfection. 

All that stood in its way was me. Cloaked in clothing, only my sword was visible to the public. They regarded me as the strongest teen, a god even amongst prodigies. 

I stood at the edge of the ruins waiting for the monster to approach. As it fully came into view its features became prominent. Eyes, fangs, arms and mouths littered the body in places it shouldn’t.

This is an amalgam. Classed as the 2nd strongest type of monster, its power is devastating but to me it is nothing more than an insect.

I directed my blade towards the monster. It did not waver, it did not tremble. I am not allowed to show fear or weakness. Those emotions do not belong to me. I am calculated and precise, that is all I know. This beast is no threat to me with one attack it will die.

“Atomize”. The body of the creature folds in on itself until it is nothing more than just an atom.

Silence fell upon the ruins. To the world, I am flawless. A blade of perfection. But perfection is a cage �" I can only feel what my gift allows me to feel. Even gods are bound by this law.

Yet there was one who broke it.
My brother.
A boy born with the weakest gift in existence. Nothing about him should have mattered. And yet… he carried the one power even I, the strongest teen, could never touch.

I may have had the strength to kill gods.

But he �" he had the power to frighten them.

Author's Note

This is the prologue to a series I'm making I just want overall opinions. It's more manga web novel writing.