Kiss me when the Sun goes down

A moment of bliss!

A sudden rendezvous

And a lot of gibberish

A tale of past memories

One vexed other love famished

Under the same roof they stood

A wish boiling up inside the boy

Framed into words uncanny

He was covetous and she was coy

The room swaddled in darkness

Jitters amplified composure eloped

Their hearts skipped beats

Marvel materialized as he'd hoped

Lips locked eyes closed

All the rules were broken

Tongues explored forbidden inches

Minds lost the map bodies hemmed in

Seasons changed in split seconds

A brief moment of sloppy silence

She broke the corral of his arms

Both mesmerized both tensed

It started with a day dream

Took off with an impulsive frown

A jiffy to be cherished forever

Ended with a Kiss when the sun went down...

 

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

This was gorgeous. I loved how the emotions just poured out of the words. They are young and nervous, and unsure, but they take a leap of faith nonetheless and it is worth it. Fantastic imagery in there too, your descriptions brought the reader into that darkened room with them.

[Frozen Eyes]

thank you for the beautiful review, means a lot. keep reading keep inspiring :)

[Luissanto]

Beautiful... The emotions flow so freely and it so well versed. Your writing is
both romantic and full of passion... Well done

[Frozen Eyes]

thank you for connecting :) keep reading :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Dedicated to two of my buddies and to their memories together. hope u'll like it :)