On your request..

JUST FOR "YOU"

On your request

I could travel to unknown lands

Explore dangerous valleys

Mountain tops and beach sands

 

On your request

I could steal away your pain

During toughest of droughts

I could make it rain

 

On your behalf 

I could fight death

Shed all my blood

Battle till my last breath

 

On your request 

To keep you from danger

I could vanish from your life

Become a total stranger

 

But just on your request

I could rush back to you as well

Only if you behest me back

I could even return from hell...

Author's Note

back to page again..

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like this romantic poem a lot and the repetitions. In my library...Bravo...........................

[Frozen Eyes]

happy u liked it.. thanks for the review :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Ashira Macy]

Love this romantic sentiment my dear, it really shows the devotion that you could show. True love is being able to let someone go when you know that they need you to do so. This was a wonderful read, thank you for sharing it.

[Frozen Eyes]

thnx for connecting :)

[Shiveon]

on your request
I can bend over my knees
live with you in the Hell
or
Escort you where have you been.....

[Frozen Eyes]

aww thats real sweet of you.. thnk u fr the wnderful conclusion. keep reading :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

I request... I do... you to...

[Frozen Eyes]

me to.. yes i will.. :) thnk u fr reviewing :)

[Kurayami]

This is such an emotional poem. I think maybe we all like a nice boyfriend who will say something like this to us...Okay, maybe just me but still....I especially like stanza four. It feels like a painful thing to do.

~Kurayami

[Frozen Eyes]

thanks for connecting.. but a boyfrend is making the requests and the girl is fulfillin his wishes.. Keep reading.. thnx fr the review.. :)