Rain over me..

Consuming the stench of your dampness

I was dancing in the rain

Watching my reflection resonate on puddles

I was relishing my pain

Flashbacks doomed my nerves all vivid visions

I was tormenting my brain

Trying to wash away your nasty contingence

I dare to take that pungent blood bath...

...Yes, I was imbrueing in the rain..

Author's Note

Strength rejuvinated

Reviews

[Christopher Casper]

I have always felt that rain is more therapeutic than sunshine weather. Well, it is for me personally anyway. It helps me sort through myself and look deeper within. I just can't seem to do that when the sun shines. Thanks for sharing with me my friend!

[Frozen Eyes]

about the sun shine we think alike :) Thank U for liking it :)

[Mayank]

"Flashbacks doomed my nerves all vivid visions
I was tormenting my brain
Trying to wash away your nasty contingence
I dare to take that pungent blood bath..."
- MAA KASAM PHOD DIYA!!!!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U aapko phaadu laga :)

[AaronFreitas]

Rain does have that soothing, mind clearing vibe to me. I think there is no time more beautiful than right after it rains and the sky is clear, the air is fresh... it's the best :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U :)

[Jamestown]

Raw, emotions! I like the feel of this write, thanks for sharing!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank You For Liking It :)

[Ashira Macy]

There is nothing quite like the rain to wash away all of the negativity that life throws at us. This is dark, but I think I detected a hint of hope that things might get better. Fabulous work!

[Frozen Eyes]

thanks dear :) and yes there's hope.. she'll rise again.. :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

oops... it's raining all over...

[Frozen Eyes]

get an umbrella :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

why can't I get drenched? :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Make a wish n You may... :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

holding your words and making a wish...

[Frozen Eyes]

And then it rains... it pours.. happy drenching.. :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

drenching to the core... ah! bliss!

[Frozen Eyes]

*Happy facE* :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

... and that was a wet evening,
no drenched bird can rest in its nest,
it's better to fly around
as the sky would be a little warm ...

[Frozen Eyes]

perfect continuation bravo :)