Kill me or keep me..

When life becomes difiicult, we look for an escape!

A lot more for peace may be,

And a little bit of rest!

With my every breath,

I keep wishing for death.

Or is it Salvation I crave for?

 

A lot of wounds started to bleed,

Strength, I keep at its best!

Concord with my state,

Will He commiserate?

Or is it Annihilation I have to wait for?

 

An impatient soul, I hold in me,

And a little bit of zest!

With every minute, I know

I’m fading, nice and slow.

Or is it Restoration I’m looking for?

Author's Note

His eyes saw salvation, what did your eyes see?

Reviews

[stansg]

Good work FE , especially liked the last verse. With every minute, I know I'm fading, nice and slow.
Happens to us all, does it not? We think that we are going downhill by the minute; but sometimes it so happens that we wake up one fine day and realise that we are actually in a better place.
Love your work. Keep writing. God bless.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for the wonderful review & connecting to the piece. God bless U too :)

[Mayank]

Thought provoking although not religious, but the meaning is difficult to be miss here.

[Frozen Eyes]

thnk u for connecting :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Came to me as lyrical. Could make a deep song. There were a lot of questions
in my mind and many of them take a lifetime to find the answers to. Very thought
provoking work. I enjoyed this work a great deal.

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for connecting :)

[ANTO]

In my estimation, in this I saw a manifestation of contemplation - salvation vs annihilation vs restoration but perhaps reconciliation is the answer here.
Thank you for the continued RR's frozenEyes
:))

[Frozen Eyes]

That's a wonderful answer. Thank U for connecting :)

[AaronFreitas]

This is beautiful my friend! Like James said Salvation first restoration later :) Good work my friend!

[Frozen Eyes]

I agree. Thank U for connecting :)

[Jamestown]

Well written piece, thought provoking and something I pray more
will think serious about, salvation is no joke but some treat it as if it is:)
Salvation 1st restoration later, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U for connecting :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Difficult to read with font and size of the words...I manage to get through this...and the verse has depth...I believe the rhyme scheme hinders...but the meaning in which you put the reader in...gives us a momentary pause to reflect within the lines...

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U, I'll try and improve the font stuff :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Much better already...you're welcome...