Divine drops

Let your imagination run wild ;)

One squeeze at the bulged container and,

It pours where you exactly want it.

I love the way it spreads in my mouth..

That scintillating feeling it brings

With the burst of sweetness.. and then,

A careless drop tries to escape through

The corner of my lips and roll to my chin,

And I quickly race behind it with my tongue

To lick it up and send it back to where it belongs.

Ah! That lustful moment makes me close my eyes.

I care not who's watching, I just allow my taste buds

To romance with the liquid form of divinity.

 

Author's Note

If the picture doesnt explain it.. try Hershey's U'll get the expression ;)

Reviews

[??????]

Very metaphorically sensual speaking write there poetess. Well done:)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank You for reading & reviewing, just experimenting with words and feelings :)

[??????]

You're very welcome:) You have a way with words:)

[Frozen Eyes]

still learning :)

[??????]

:)Smilesssssssssss

[Frozen Eyes]

*blushes with a grin*

[??????]

Well I think that's on the other end where the blushes are lol. I sort of got that in reading.

[Tks]

I knew it was either a bottle of ketchup or chocolate hahaha! An amazingly descriptive write with a strong narrator's voice guiding you through her multiple levels of bliss. Well done!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U, specially for the "multiple levels of bliss" part .. :)

[Ashira Macy]

So much yum! Gotta love chocolate. But I like how without the context it is nice and naughty sounding all at once. Well done!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U & cheers to chocolate :)

[sinNsincerity]

My imagination did run wild hehe, but I totally know the feeling when eating chocolate and a whole load of foods... haha An orgasm for my mouth! And this read was an orgasm for my mind.

[Frozen Eyes]

Wow that's a mind-"blowing" compliment. thank U :)

[AaronFreitas]

Nice write :) Very creative piece and nice pic :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank U :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

And I thought I had a sweet tooth...lol
This poem is bursting at the seams with
energy. Powerful imagery. The light hearted
side of the writer turned out to be a pleasant
surprise for me.

[Frozen Eyes]

Wow! thank U for being surprised :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned and great description:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

Thank You :)

[Kshitij Srivastava]

Beautiful writing and a crystal clear imagery combined with just the right measure of desire and sensuality.
Great job. 👍😃

[Frozen Eyes]

yeah chocolate does that to me.. heheehe.. thanks for appreciating :)

[Kshitij Srivastava]

It does that to many...quite a flirt that thing. :p