Choke

Mu beautiful mother, her journey

Was once a child called Shadow,
her real name Purchase May
A lovely child  she was
or as is so, I'm told

Her mother Miss's Flanaghan had her own hands behind her back
No mother to defend her, too young she became my Mom
A child becomes a parent, never had a parent herself?
Name of Purchase suited her well

Still she was a shadow
now she's less than that

Can I scream in this?
   "Is this here yers or mine?"

I knew her and her beauty
Was it only I that saw?

I tossed her mother into the dirt
I shunned her rest of kin
I had a thousand children, not one will ever respect them

I paint in honest colors
Gave my mothers life away for that
I swear I'm not to bargain
no place to negotiate with me

thanks for lettin me scream

still it all goes slowly
the life, the wine of life you drink
just when you think you've run out

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I paint in honest colors
Gave my mothers life away for that
I swear I'm not to bargain
no place to negotiate with me

thanks for lettin me scream

This is a wonderful write here, I really enjoyed this.
There is alot here. You wrote this to raw and honest.
Amazing I must say.

I really like the part I posted here in this section.
I also liked the part of where you said

I tossed her mother into the dirt
I shunned her rest of kin
I had a thousand children, not one will ever respect them

I like This. Totally amazing.