EXPLODE, ERODE & IMPLODE

Inspired by my review of Bobbiegirl's Bottle Gap

EXPLODE, ERODE & IMPLODE

SHAKEN NOT STIRRED   Rythmes drip right off the tongue ~~~~~
BUSTED NOT BROKEN   Images fly right on top of the page ~~~~ 

STEAMED NOT FRIED    Emotions are destined to explode ~~~~

BORROWED NOT NEW  Smiles are starting to erode  ~~~~

BLACK NOT BROOD      Minds are bound to implode ~~~

©GBU 309 655P

Author's Note

Just a quirk of a thought ... Needs some more work.. just wanted to get it out there...

Reviews

[Alex W]

I liked it, I thought it was odd lol.

But I did like it :-)

[Narnie]

Interesting form. I'm not familiar with Bobbiegirl but always think it is the best compliment to one poet when another takes inspiration.