Forest of dreams

Trees made of glass

Grass a sapphire blue

The moon a vibrant yellow

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire

The moon turned blood red

A scythe to my head

The ground now a beautiful violet 

Reviews

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Trees made of glass
ME: OOOOH HOW PWETTY!!!!

Grass a sapphire blue
ME: WHERE?????

The moon a vibrant yellow
ME: I guess its a little yellow, here...waaaah it sounds so beautiful!!!!!!

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire
ME: I LOVE BUTTERFLIES!!!!!!! *attempts to fly off chair* No....

The moon turned blood red
ME: *gasps madly* O.O A TWIST????

A scythe to my head
ME: That's not my scyhte is it?? *turns around to see shiny scythe still behind me* WHO THE FUDGE IS THAT??????

The ground now a beautiful violet
ME: O.O.....THAT WAS CREEPY COOL!!!!! WOOT WOOT! AWESOME MAN!!!!!! :3

[Rika]

Rolf!

[Bound In Red]

So simple and yet so beautiful.

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Ooh, I love how visual this poem is. The descriptions you use are just, magical. They show us a surreal world in which there is beautiful darkness which leads into fear and death. I wonder if the colors have some sort of significance.. they add to the power of this piece. I loved this. You never disappoint. All of your poems are fantastic.

[MandaBear]

I would love to see this! This world sounds so interesting to look at. I bet you this would be an awesome painting for someone to paint. You are transported into a new and vibrant world that is so unlike what most of us have ever seen. This is a great write =) Keep up the awesome work!

[Felicity's Eve]

Truly incredible. ^^

You have quite the imagination, might I say. ;)

[Rika]

Thanks! ^-^

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description create a good vision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CecilA]

GDM,

Reading this scares the hell out of me! The Grim Reaper with a twist. I don't like it but I really like it. See what your writing does to me.

? wouldn't fireflies or moths be better suited for a moon lit environment

Thanks for sharing it with us,

Cecil

[Rika]

lol sorry i not meaning to, and thanks

[CecilA]

Please always mean to evoke your desired response. I'm a big boy, I can take it. LOL

[Becca Bishop]

Awesome :P The description of such a beautiful place make the murder/death thingy all the more horrible. I love it!!!

[♪Barklight♪]

beautiful senery, (i've read this before! ^_^)

[Rika]

u dident have to review twice lol XD

[♪Barklight♪]

oh well XD

[Lino Rie]

Love it. Awesomely amazing!