Stained black

Wings black as night

Heart cold as snow

He won’t protect you

He’ll only deceive you 

Once a warrior of light

Now a soldier of dark

The most evil creature I know

The one whom I despise

My angel

Reviews

[Butters]

Honestly, I LOVE this!! I don't know what else to say, it's just good. For the most part I don't do sappy poems and this is the first of my kind I've seen on this site. It reminds me of one I just posted I'd like you to check out it's called The One.

[MandaBear]

Wow. So good. Its so good I am not sure I have the right words for how awesome this is. Great job!

[bunny]

not to be rude but OH MY JESUS THIS IS SO GREAT SO MOVING SO REALISTIC cough cough i LOVED it!

[InsanityWriter]

Oooooh! I like this. :) Great job, I love how you wrote it!! ^_^

[KayK143]

Even though it's short, it's very descriptive and the vision is so vivid to me.

[Country Girl]

I really love this one(:

[Mark Emerson]

it sounds like the devil when he first fell from heaven good peace

[Rhianne Ney]

The twist and turn of the poem is unexpected but nonetheless great poem

[♪Barklight♪]

Brilliant! X3

[Death Girl]

Love it.

[Clare the Artist]

Dude this is short yet descriptive and simple.