Tears of sorrow

Fiery ashes spread

Righteous swords clash

 

Horrid howling screams

Drenched in murderous blood

 

Emotional tears flow

Rain begins to fall

 

Never enough to wash this sorrow away

Reviews

[Bluefire]

Trully beautiful, well done!

[マリー..]

I feel this gets ones imaginative medieval juices flowing which is alway a plus, with a distinct masculine air to it..

[Rika]

Yep, well more samurai really

[Sami Khalil]

I like the ending...

[Owlgirl]

Wow! I love the descriptions in this!!! Great use of imagery and adjectives "Murderous blood" is probobly my favorite.

[Rika]

Thanks allot!

[Falling Leaf.]

Very powerful. One thing: you misspelled sorrow in your title. Nevertheless a poignant piece that I loved!

[Rika]

Sorry ill fix that.

[Falling Leaf.]

S'okay. Great piece :)

[RachelReaper]

and so begins the story of my life, XD jk, but nice poem

[Rika]

How is that the story of your life???????

[RachelReaper]

haha, trust me, you do not even want to know, kid.

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I could have sworn you were talking about my country from the first two lines I was like O.o!!!!! Wha-? But no, this is war like in almost every other country too, lol. :D LOVED IT!!!!

[Steven Cash]

Nice

[Bumble]

Pretty good, by water do you mean rain?

[Rika]

Yea, dont know why i put water but i fixed it now. Thanks!

[Bumble]

Welcome! And everyone makes mistakes! n_n You did well with this poem either way!

[Rika]

Again thanks!!!!!