What you should really fear

Shadows in the back

Something form the past

Stalking you from afar

Knowing where you are

It gets so much nearer

Almost like in a mirror

It grabs your neck

Your friends stand back

Wondering why you just strangled your self

 

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

There was an eerie feel to this! I didn't expect the ending. Great write!

[Acucena G.]

its fantastic, i love itf, but I think you might check the spelling of few words, besides that job well done.

[NibbleLove]

That was really good! Entertaining! :D

[Jamie Cook]

O.O Dude!...I got it! :D This was impressive Chris! Like, coool ohmygawd the ending took a bit but then Im like *mindblown* Awesome job, it was short but potent!

[Rika]

Thanks jammy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jamie Cook]

welcome!

[Imara]

Wow powerful and true, it strikes me right in the heart and brings me back to some of my dark days. If only I had found this poem then. Amazing job!

[InsanityWriter]

O.O So true though... Amazing write. ;)

[MandaBear]

Wow. Kinda scared me lol Which i might say is not a bad thing. I didn't except that! Great job!

[Revera Love]

Simple. Scary. Good.

[♪Barklight♪]

Yep pretty much, nice write

(exept my friends stand there like da faqu are you waaaaaaaaaaaaay up there in the tr- s**t don't jump down from there!!!! n im like b***h please m crazy but i know my limmits XD)

[Rika]

Lol thanks!

[Death Girl]

Wow love it. This piece is really amazing. Great write.

[Rika]

Thank-you a lot!!!