Dark Knight

Oh dark knight
How you shine in the moon light
In the waters you gleam
Your refection glows
But still your very soul dwells in the dark
As you stand next to the oak
In your black cloak
You look up at the night sky
At the bright stars that are up there

Author's Note

goes with this http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GDMonster/1008869/

Reviews

[The dark story]

the title is very much different from the verses.you are describing a night(which you have done very elegantly though)but the title is referring the"KNIGHT".i didn't get the connection between them.but the poem is sorely very nice and the description is very much appreciable.nice work

[Rika]

my bad i forgot to put the k in knight

[The dark story]

oh.it's okay....:)

[Steven Cash]

Why so serious?

[Rika]

not that kind of dark knight!!!

[Steven Cash]

Oh... well next my review.

And here... we... Go!

It was good

[Rika]

but thanks i guss

[Steven Cash]

lol :) I love The Dark Knight

but really a good poem

[Freedom's Child]

I like how it starts with the beauty of the black knight. Good imagery throughout.

[Timeless-Chan]

idk if it has a connection to batman or not (does it? O.o) but its a good poem:)

[Rika]

Its not that kind of dark knight, think dragons and stuff like that.

[Timeless-Chan]

Ohhhhh alright that makes it seem more interesting^_^ great write!

[deepblue04]

I like it good job! but my portayal of a dark knight is a little different.... unique

[Rika]

Thanks!

[Chloe]

Awesome. I like the picture it painted in my head

[Jolly]

i could totally picture this perfectly, all ominous, :)) nice job

[Blacke Hennessey]

Wish there was more for poems like these could get deeper. I like it though