What has yet to come

This dose not ryme at all but each line dose gose together in telling whats going on here.

Broken glass imbedded in my feet

Thorns around my ankles

Castle gleaming in the moon light  

Night air chilled with fright

Engulfed in darkness

Unsure of the fate ahead

Growls of the unfair

Falling to the ground

Wishing you were there

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Wow beautifully sinister. great 100%

[Westminster Abbey]

Beautifully chilling, painting a sinisterly stunning picture in my mind's eye. 100/100

[Bound In Red]

Very dark and sinister as others have said. I really liked this one.

[CecilA]

GDM,

It's a great poem; deep in fantastic imagery. One thing I don't understand is: 'Falling to the ground.' How do growls fall to the ground? Growls dissipate in the air.

Thank you for requesting my review and sharing this interesting poem with us.

Cecil

[Callme V]

Does it have a meaning? What significance does the castle have on the rest of the poem?

[Felicity's Eve]

Sinister and chilling. Gave me shivers! >.<

Awesome write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. A lot of mystery and I like the description. Better to have a second person when darkness and fright is our emotion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[♪Barklight♪]

Brilliant, quite chilling yet, brilliant ^_^ then again I guess that's what makes it so

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was depressing, but amazing. I enjoyed the read though it was sad. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Tina Kline]

Very good. This has a nice sinister chill to it.