By The Lake

I wrote this poem thinking about our connectedness to the inner world and our ancestors. According to Jung's theory our ancenstors' experiences are our guides.

I see the smile of the moon
Alive in your grey mirror
Reflection of a blue heart
Worshipping the teary stars.

The first white leaves fall on you
Spirits swirling in your soul,
Gentle voices talk to me;
My archetypes mark my roots.

GKN2016

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes we are really connected with our soul, our ancestors and even with God. It's easy to connect the dots of past but hard to predict the future. Nice Poem.

[GKN]

Thank you, Skyfall. You are right but listening to our inner voice helps when planning for the future.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Exactly you're right. Your most welcome.

[Zami Amma]

This is such a graceful poem, I love it! The deep rooted meaning and our ancestors being our guides back home. Very well crafted poem! :)

[Belinda Bennett]

Really lovely poem with great descriptions.

[GKN]

Thank you Belinda!

[GKN]

Thank you guys for reading my poem! Don't know if I can reply to each one of you as I'm new here!:)

[Jade]

this is a real lovely write.

[GKN]

Yes, I can reply, haha! Thank you Kelcee

[Hebe]

lovely and eloquently put :)

[GKN]

Thank you for the kind words, Hebe