Nocturnal Wish

Reflecting upon light and darkness. Solitude can helps us grow and disconnect from negative experiences.

Your summer hands flower
sweet gardenias at dawn,
The petals wake;
Longing blooms patiently
under moonbeams of sapphire,
Soft rainfall of passion
with incandescent love
showers your raven soul.

GKN2016

Reviews

[Lorry]

Superb. along with the light and dark, I read also the difference between living and being alive. Where would we be without that falling rain, to let us know how truly alive we can be. Love this.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your words are very enchanting. A journey from darkness to light .

[GKN]

Hey, you are a fast reviewer! I just came back from other sites! Thank you for the generous comment!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your always welcome my friend :)

[GKN]

Thank you for the kind words, Kelcee

[Jade]

i really love this piece, so well written and expressed, loved that last line.